About me Cody

I do track I'm going to do is bowling on Saturday I play video games and I got pets I got a pool and a hot tub and pet I have are 3 dog 2 cats 7 birds 1 guinea pig and 2 tanks of fish and a pond of fish.

Tuesday 7 January 2014


THE RACE
It's springtime in Pennsylvania for Jack Mama.  It is 7am on a Monday morning and Jack is having breakfast and his pit crew has phoned to make sure he is awake to go to practice before his Nascar race in two weeks. The race is in Daytona beach Florida, he has 6 days at home to practice. He leaves on Sunday for Daytona beach. He will get there in 2 days. That will leave him 3 days for practice and the big race is on a Saturday.


Monday he's on his way to practice and he made it on time and got his gear on. He started to go around the track 30 times, then call for today he's been doing that for 4 days. On the last day of practice he got pulled over by the cops and the cop said "license and registration please and thank you." 

Jack Mama said "ok officer". 

Jack Mama gave the officer his license and the registration and the officer said "I will be back in a minute". 

The officer came back gives he all his papers back and said "drive safe" and the officer went back to his car and drove away.

The big day arrives, he leaves to go to his race in Daytona beach Florida and with his pit crew they drive through 5 different cities to get to Daytona beach Florida. They made it to their to hotel and they got some sleep. The next day they were training for the race in Daytona beach Florida. This race means  a lot to Jack because if he wins this race he will be ranked number one in the world. 

It's  Saturday the race will start at 3 o'clock in the afternoon Jack Mama is getting ready before the race and he saw Black Betty. Black Betty is the most evil 
Race car driver in the world. Black Betty came over to see Jack Mama and Black Betty said "hello Jack Mama do not die today." 

Jack mama replied "I won't die today!"   

"You are going to die, see you on the race car track!"  Black Betty said as she walked away.

Black Betty is Jack Mama's nemesis.  If anybody can get in his way it's black betty.

The race is about to begin, Jack mama is in the pole position and black Betty is in the back of the line. The guy has the flag in his hand and he says "on your mark, get ready, set, go! And the race is on, the guy on the intercom says "Jack mama is in first place black Betty is  taking out of all the race car drivers and trying to get to the front of the line black Betty has something  in her hand. Jack looks out his window, Black Betty has a gun! She shot and luckily the bullet misses Jack and shot a cop in the arm instead.

Jack Mama through his race helmet and cops got on the track with their car to go after Black Betty. Black Betty shot Jack Mama's tire right off his car and he lost control and he hit the wall and his car caught on fire and he got out of his car and Black Betty was waiting  for him. Black Betty said "this is the end of line" with the gun in her hand and all 14 cop cars on the scene, the cops draw their guns out and told Black Betty to put the gun down and Black Betty put the gun on Jack Mama's forehead and Betty said to the cops was "good bye Jack Mama!" 

The gun screamed a loud "BANG!"  The cops fired back and killed Black Betty as well and that's the story of the race.


The END by Cody calcutt 
 






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Character descriptions


Main character  

Jack mama Email jackmama100@gmail.com password 100mamajack 
Instagram login is jackmama200 password 200mamajack

He's a race car driver 

He is from Pennsylvania 

He is 20 years old he been racing since he was 5 his birthday is August 1st


I'm going to Instagram account for him because him is a amate

This story is about an important  race where jack pushes it to limit. If he wins he will go to the finals if loses he will end his racing career.his archenemy is a female race name black Betty she tough and she cheats and can kill and she has before .....

Second character 

Black Betty 

She is from  Germany 

Where she escaped from prison

She is 18 years old she was race since she was 3 





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